Sunday, January 24, 2016

I Told You This Wasn't No Sweet Valley High

Time again for Weekend Writing Warriors and Snippet Sunday!




Continuing with my YA coming-of-age mystery, Shades of Blue. (You can catch up on the earlier excerpts here.) Last week's snippet ended with JoJo in peril because she foolishly went into the woods with Chip Wiley on the way home from school. He doesn't rape her, but he touches her inappropriately and makes her touch him as well. As bad as that is for JoJo, she's almost more hurt by being overpowered and paralyzed with fear, because it completely shatters the tough image she's always had of herself. This snippet takes place after JoJo finally manages to scream, although they're in the middle of the woods where nobody will hear her. Or so they think.

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When I stopped screaming, Chip was laughing in my ear.

"Next time we'll—"

He broke off and let go of me abruptly. When I opened my eyes to see why, he was on the ground with Sam on top of him. My knees buckled and I slid to a sitting position against the side of the tree house as I watched Sam’s fist hitting Chip in the face over and over.

That was when I saw the bruises on Sam’s back through the thin material of his sweat-soaked T-shirt. They registered in my brain but were quickly overshadowed by fresh terror when Freddy and Danny rushed out of the tree house and grabbed Sam. I watched them pull him off Chip and realized the three of them had planned this to get Sam out here so they could gang up on him.

Then everything began to go gray.


Tune in next week to see if those new muscles of Sam's came in handy. Or you could always go buy your own copy of Shades of Blue here. ;-) And please check out the other WWW and SS bloggers. Something for everyone among these talented writers!

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14 comments:

  1. I'm glad Chip didn't rape her, though this is bad enough. I have a feeling she's going to have to pull herself together and help Sam.

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  2. Oh man, this situation has definitely taken a turn for the worst. I dread what Chip will do to Sam if she can't help him. Way to leave us with a cliffhanger! ;)

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  3. More and more complicated, with the two henchmen joining the fight. I hope she can help Sam! Great snippet...

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  4. Nooooo! I didn't see that coming!

    Just bought it for my Kindle :-)

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  5. Nicely constructed scene that hints at events far bigger than ten sentences.

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  6. You've left us in a scary place. Can't wait for next Sunday.

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  7. Aieeee! Scary. Great snippet, Joyce.

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  8. Oh wow, I didn't see that coming! Poor Sam. :-( Things have certainly gone from bad to worse. Great snippet.

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  9. Very intrigued. Had to go back and read your earlier snippets. Very nice!

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  10. Oh wow ... great snippet .... can't wait for the next snippet!

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  11. Great snippet. Both she and Sam are in big trouble.

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  12. Im glad he didn't rape her but man this whole scene is just insanely intense. I hope she can pull through this.

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  13. Oh no! No no no no. This just keeps getting worse for her! What are the bruises on his back from? I need to know what's going to happen! Can't wait for next week now.

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  14. Intense scene! The reader really feels how helpless she must feel watching that unfold.

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